Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接并提供了年龄、车辆特点和学习结果，内容较具体，结构也基本清晰。但“rabbit bike”表达不自然，建议说“a small bicycle”或“a children’s bike”；“chilling wheels”应改为“training wheels”，并注意主谓一致（“the training wheels helped”）。另外，“became became”是重复错误。可以使用“because”或“as a result”连接原因和结果，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I did. When I was seven, my mom bought me a small children’s bike with training wheels. They helped me keep my balance, so I quickly became more confident and started riding around my neighborhood.

提案: 回答表达了明确观点，也尝试解释原因，但存在明显的重复和词汇使用错误。“speculative”不表示“受欢迎”，应改为“popular”或“common”；“my country because my country”重复，应删除。句子“my country taxi and the small taxis”不自然，可以说“taxis and small cars are widely available”。此外，理由与观点之间应使用完整句子连接，避免以“Because”单独开头。

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Taxis and small cars are widely available and relatively affordable, so many people choose them instead of riding bicycles. In addition, the heavy traffic and hot weather make cycling less convenient.

× With training wheels, the chilling wheels helps me learn to keep my balance so I quickly became became more confident and could ride around the neighborhood.

✓ With training wheels, the training wheels help me learn to keep my balance, so I quickly became more confident and could ride around the neighborhood.

“Wheels”是复数名词，因此不能使用表示单数主语的“helps”，应改为“help”。另外，“became”重复了一次，应删除重复词。

× With training wheels, the chilling wheels helps me learn to keep my balance so I quickly became became more confident and could ride around the neighborhood.

✓ With training wheels, the training wheels helped me learn to keep my balance, so I quickly became more confident and could ride around the neighborhood.

整段是在讲童年时发生的事情，使用的是过去时。因此，“helps”应改为过去式“helped”。

× With training wheels, the chilling wheels helps me learn to keep my balance so I quickly became became more confident and could ride around the neighborhood.

✓ With training wheels, the training wheels help me learn to keep my balance, so I quickly became more confident and could ride around the neighborhood.

主语“the training wheels”是复数，所以谓语动词应使用“help”，不能使用单数形式“helps”。

× Because my country because my country taxi and the small taxis are very popular and spread all over the country

✓ Because taxis in my country and small taxis are very popular and are spread all over the country.

“taxi”是可数名词。这里表示一类出租车，应该使用复数形式“taxis”。同时，“my country taxi”不是正确的名词短语，应改为“taxis in my country”。

× Because my country because my country taxi and the small taxis are very popular and spread all over the country

✓ Because taxis in my country and small taxis are very popular and are spread all over the country.

主语是复数名词短语“taxis in my country and small taxis”，所以使用“are”是正确的。为了保持被动结构，后面也应使用“are spread”。

× No, I think bikes aren't speculative in my country. Because my country because my country taxi and the small taxis are very popular and spread all over the country

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because taxis and small taxis are very popular and are spread all over the country.

“Because”引导的原因从句不能单独构成完整句子，应与主句连接。另外，“because my country”重复，应删除。回答中还应使用完整、清晰的句子结构。