Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，但“with my childhood”用法不自然，应改为“during my childhood”或“when I was a child”。建议先直接回答，再补充一个具体细节，例如骑车的地点、用途或感受。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

提案: 回答中有较多难以理解的表达，影响信息传达。应先明确回答“Yes, they are”或“No, they aren’t”，然后用连接词补充原因和具体例子。注意使用正确词汇：bike/bicycle，而不是“bag”；如果想表达共享单车，应使用“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. You can see people riding them everywhere, and bike-sharing services are also very common because they are convenient and environmentally friendly.

× Yeah, I had a bike with my childhood.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike during my childhood.

“with my childhood”中的介词使用不正确。表示“在童年时期”应使用“during”，所以应改为“during my childhood”。也可以说“When I was a child, I had a bike.”

× Afro New York country, you can see the bags everywhere and the sharing bags and bags back from himself as well.

✓ Across my country, you can see bikes everywhere, including shared bikes and bikes rented by individuals.

“Afro New York country”不是正确的介词短语。根据问题语境，这里应表达“在我的国家各地”，可以使用“across my country”。另外，“from himself”不能表达“由个人租用”，应改为“rented by individuals”。

× Afro New York country, you can see the bags everywhere and the sharing bags and bags back from himself as well.

✓ Across my country, you can see bikes everywhere, including shared bikes and bikes rented by individuals.

“sharing bikes”表示“正在共享自行车”，不符合这里“共享单车”的意思。作定语表示“被共享的”时，应使用过去分词“shared”，因此应说“shared bikes”。“rented”也是过去分词，用于说明这些自行车是“被租用的”。

× Afro New York country, you can see the bags everywhere and the sharing bags and bags back from himself as well.

✓ Across my country, you can see bikes everywhere, including shared bikes and bikes rented by individuals.

“himself”是反身代词，只能在主语和宾语指同一个人时使用，例如“He hurt himself.”这里想表达“个人”，应使用名词复数“individuals”，不能使用“himself”。