Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题，没有直接回答“有还是没有”。应先明确表达观点，例如“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，然后补充一到两个具体细节，如买车的时间、骑车的地点或和谁一起骑。注意不要重复考官的问题。

例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was about six years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你基本表达了“自行车很受欢迎，因为方便，而且可以和朋友一起玩”的意思，但“bags”应改为“bikes”，“are probably in our country”不自然，应说“are popular in my country”。句子结构较混乱，建议使用清晰的结构：先回答观点，再用“because”说明原因，最后给出具体场景或结果。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and inexpensive. Many children ride them to school or around their neighborhoods with their friends.

× Yes, I think the bags are probably in our country because it is convenient to go outside with but play with my friends.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are probably popular in our country because they are convenient for going outside and playing with my friends.

“but”表示转折，但句子表达的是并列关系，因此应改为“and”。使用连接词时，要根据上下文判断是并列、转折、因果还是选择关系。这里“going outside”和“playing with my friends”是两个并列的活动。

× Yes, I think the bags are probably in our country because it is convenient to go outside with but play with my friends.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are probably popular in our country because they are convenient for going outside and playing with my friends.

“bikes”是复数名词，所以不能用单数代词“it”指代，应使用复数代词“they”。另外，回答问题时应使用题目中的关键词“bikes”，并说“bikes are popular”，而不是“the bags are in our country”。