Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly and use natural expressions. “I belong from the best family” is unclear and contradicts the idea that your family could not afford a bike; say “I came from a low-income family” if that is what you mean. Use “could not afford a bike” instead of “were not able to afford bike,” and say “walk” rather than “walk by feet.” Also, avoid repeating “vehicles,” since the question is specifically about bicycles.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family was on a tight budget, so we couldn’t afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school and other nearby places.

提案: Give a clear answer at the beginning and focus on bicycles rather than vehicles in general. The phrase “in this drawing for centuries” is incorrect and unclear; use “in my country” or “in recent years.” Correct “boss” to “buses” and “maneuver items” to “motorbikes” if those are the intended words. Explain specifically why bikes are popular, such as their low cost, convenience, or environmental benefits, and avoid repeating “popular.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. They are affordable, convenient, and help people avoid traffic jams. However, many people still prefer cars or buses for longer journeys.

× I belong from the best family so that we are not able to afford bike or any kind of vehicles.

✓ I come from a poor family, so we were not able to afford a bike or any kind of vehicle.

The verb belong is followed by the preposition to, not from. However, come from is more natural when describing family background. Use afford a bike because bike is a singular countable noun and needs an article.

× I belong from the best family so that we are not able to afford bike or any kind of vehicles.

✓ I came from a poor family, so we were not able to afford a bike or any kind of vehicle.

The question asks about your childhood, so the past tense is needed. Use came and were not able instead of present-tense forms such as belong and are not able.

× I belong from the best family so that we are not able to afford bike or any kind of vehicles.

✓ I came from a poor family, so we were not able to afford a bike or any kind of vehicle.

After any kind of, the noun is normally singular: any kind of vehicle. The expression refers to one category of vehicle rather than several individual vehicles.

× So we prefer walking by feet.

✓ So we preferred walking on foot.

The fixed expression is on foot, not by feet. Because you are talking about your childhood, use the past form preferred.

× So we prefer walking by feet.

✓ So we preferred walking on foot.

The answer describes a past situation, so prefer should be changed to its past form, preferred.

× That's why I did not have any vehicles when I was a child.

✓ That's why I did not have a vehicle when I was a child.

When referring to not owning even one vehicle, the natural form is a vehicle. The singular noun matches the meaning more precisely.

× Obviously, in this drawing for centuries, many vehicles like cars 3, boss and maneuver items are very popular in my country because it is very efficient and easy to travel here and there.

✓ Obviously, in this country, vehicles such as cars, buses, and motorbikes are very popular because they are efficient, and they make it easy to travel from place to place.

The pronoun it does not clearly refer to the plural subject vehicles. Use they for plural vehicles. The phrase they make it easy to travel clearly expresses that vehicles facilitate travel.

× That's why it is very popular in my country.

✓ That's why they are very popular in my country.

The previous subject is plural, vehicles, so use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are. The singular form it is not consistent with that subject.