Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接并且有清晰的过去与现在对比，也提供了个人感受，内容基本充分。主要问题是语法错误："I really have time" 应改为 "I don't really have time"。此外，"busy with studies" 不如 "busy with my studies" 自然。可以加入一个更具体的细节，例如骑车去哪里或和谁一起骑，这样答案会更生动。

例: Absolutely. I had a small bike when I was seven, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood with my friends. However, I don’t really have time to ride it anymore because I’m busy with my studies, which is a bit of a shame.

提案: 回答包含过去和现在的对比，思路是合理的，但有明显的表达和语法问题。"A few days years ago" 不正确，应改为 "A few years ago"；"at that age" 指代不清，应具体说明是年轻人或人们；"because people don't have enough money" 的时态也应与过去保持一致，改为 "because people didn’t have enough money"。此外，可以使用更准确的连接词和具体原因，例如公共交通更方便、汽车更舒适。

例: Yes, bikes were quite popular in China a few years ago, especially because many people couldn’t afford cars. However, nowadays, fewer people rely on bicycles for long-distance travel, as the subway is more convenient and many families own a car. That said, shared bikes are still common in big cities.

× Absolutely, I had a small bike when I was 7 and I loved riding it around my neighborhood, but nowadays as a high school student I'm very busy with studies so I really have time to ride it anymore, which is a bit of a shame.

✓ Absolutely, I had a small bike when I was 7 and I loved riding it around my neighborhood, but nowadays, as a high school student, I'm very busy with my studies, so I really don't have time to ride it anymore, which is a bit of a shame.

“anymore”通常用于否定句，表示“再也不”。原句使用了肯定形式“have time”，所以应在“have”前加“don't”，构成“don't have time”。另外，“nowadays”描述现在的情况，因此使用一般现在时“don't have”是正确的。

× A few days years ago it was very popular because at that age, uh, people don't have enough money.

✓ A few years ago, it was very popular because, at that age, people didn't have enough money.

“a few”后面应直接接可数名词复数。“days years”把两个时间单位错误地放在了一起，应改为“a few years”。“a few years ago”表示“几年前”。

× A few days years ago it was very popular because at that age, uh, people don't have enough money.

✓ A few years ago, they were very popular because, at that age, people didn't have enough money.

前文的问题对象是“bikes”，是复数名词，因此不能使用单数代词“it”和单数谓语“was”。应使用复数代词“they”和复数谓语“were”。

× A few days years ago it was very popular because at that age, uh, people don't have enough money.

✓ A few years ago, it was very popular because, at that age, people didn't have enough money.

“A few years ago”和“at that age”都表示过去的时间，因此后面的动词也应使用一般过去时。“don't have”应改为“didn't have”。

× However, nowadays, umm, more and more Chinese people tend to, uh, take a subway or just drive their own cars to go anywhere.

✓ However, nowadays, more and more Chinese people tend to take the subway or just drive their own cars to go anywhere.

表示乘坐地铁这一交通方式时，英语中通常使用固定表达“take the subway”，而不是“take a subway”。这里的“the”用于表示人们熟悉的公共交通系统。