Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the examiner's question directly and avoid asking the examiner a personal question, as this does not add relevant content. Add one specific supporting detail, such as when you used the bike or what you used it for. A short reason or example would make the answer more developed while keeping it natural and effective.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Use the correct subject and structure: say “Yes, they are” because “bikes” is plural. Avoid repetition in “I’m Brazilian and in Brazil,” and replace the unclear final sentence with a natural expression such as “Bikes are a common form of transportation, especially in large cities.” Add a specific reason or example, and use a linking word such as “especially” or “because” to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, they are. I’m from Brazil, where bikes are quite popular, especially in large cities. Many people use them for commuting because they are affordable and convenient, although heavy traffic can sometimes make cycling difficult.

× Yes it does.

✓ Yes, I do.

The question asks whether you think bikes are popular, so the subject in the answer should be I, not it. The auxiliary verb do must agree with I: Yes, I do.

× It's one of the the transportation option always in the most and the big cities.

✓ It's one of the most common transportation options in big cities.

After one of, the following noun must be plural because the expression refers to one item from a group. Therefore, option should be options.

× It's one of the the transportation option always in the most and the big cities.

✓ It's one of the most common transportation options in big cities.

The article the is repeated unnecessarily in the phrase the the transportation option. Also, big cities is used in a general sense, so it does not need the before it.

× It's one of the the transportation option always in the most and the big cities.

✓ It's one of the most common transportation options in big cities.

Most needs to modify an adjective in this structure. The phrase most common means having a high level of popularity or frequency. The original phrase the most and the big cities is incomplete and does not form a grammatical description.