Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，并提供了颜色、年龄和使用场景等细节，结构基本清楚。不过有明显的语法和搭配错误：应将“learned it to ride it”改为“learned to ride it”，将“over rode”改为“rode”。另外，开头说十二岁有自行车，后面说七岁学会骑车，时间逻辑可以表达得更清楚。建议使用“By the age of...”来连接时间，并用一个连接词补充周末骑车的目的或感受。

例: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was twelve. I learned to ride it at the age of seven, and I often rode it to the park with my friends on weekends. It was a great way to get some exercise and spend time outdoors.

提案: 回答了问题，并给出了价格低和实用这两个理由，也提供了学生和外卖员的例子，内容方向较好。但“shore trips”用词不准确，应根据语境改为“short trips”；“they are shared bike services in Big City”语法不完整，应改为“there are shared-bike services in big cities”或具体说明城市。建议使用“Moreover”连接第二个理由，并明确说明共享单车如何提升自行车的普及度。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and delivery workers use them to get around. Moreover, shared-bike services are available in most big cities, so people can easily rent a bike whenever they need one.

× Yes, I had a small red bike when I was twelve. I learned it to ride it when I was seven and I over rode to the park with my friends on weekends.

✓ Yes, I had a small red bike when I was twelve. I learned to ride it when I was seven and I over rode to the park with my friends on weekends.

“learn”后面通常使用不定式“learn to do something”，不能说“learn something to do something”。因此应将“learned it to ride it”改为“learned to ride it”。

× Yes, I had a small red bike when I was twelve. I learned it to ride it when I was seven and I over rode to the park with my friends on weekends.

✓ Yes, I had a small red bike when I was twelve. I learned to ride it when I was seven and I rode to the park with my friends on weekends.

这个故事描述的是过去发生的事情，因此动词应使用一般过去时。“over rode”不是这里正确的表达；“ride”的过去式是“rode”。应说“rode to the park”。

× Well, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and useful for shore trips. For example, many students and delivery workers use bikes and they are shared bike services in Big City.

✓ Well, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and useful for shore trips. For example, many students and delivery workers use bikes, and there are shared-bike services in Big City.

表达“有共享单车服务”时，应使用“There be”句型。因为“shared-bike services”是复数，所以使用“There are”，而不是“They are”。“There are shared-bike services”表示“有共享单车服务”。