Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且语法正确，但内容过于简短，缺少解释。可以补充一个原因或相关细节，例如说明你为什么没有自行车，以及你小时候通常如何出行。这样能让答案更完整、更自然。

例: No, I didn’t. My parents thought it was a little dangerous, so I usually walked to school or played with my friends in the park instead.

提案: 回答没有完全对应问题。问题询问的是自行车现在在你国家是否流行，而你主要谈论了童年时期的情况。此外，"all of my friends have"时态错误，应改为"all of my friends had bikes"。建议先直接回答现在的情况，再使用连接词补充过去的经历，并加入具体原因或例子。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and young adults. When I was a child, nearly all of my friends had bikes, and we often rode them to school or around our neighborhood.

× Yes, I do, when I was a child, all of my friends have.

✓ Yes, I do. When I was a child, all of my friends had bikes.

“When I was a child”表示过去的时间，因此后面的动词也应使用一般过去时。“have”应改为“had”。另外，“all of my friends have”后面缺少宾语，不能完整表达“所有朋友都有自行车”，所以应补充“bikes”。建议描述过去的经历时，注意整句保持过去时，并确保动词后面的必要成分完整。