Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too short to demonstrate a wider range of language. Add one specific detail, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it. Avoid simply repeating the wording of the question.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

提案: Your answer has a clear opinion, reasons, an example, and an appropriate linking word. However, “choose stand” is incorrect and unclear; say “choose them” or “choose bicycles instead.” Also, “quick journey” should be “quick journeys” or “short trips.” To sound more natural, avoid repeating “bikes” and use a concise concluding sentence.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. They also help people avoid traffic, especially in busy cities. For example, students and delivery workers ride them every day, so many people choose bicycles instead of cars for quick journeys.

× So many people choose stand for quick journey.

✓ So many people choose to stand for a quick journey.

After the verb choose, use the infinitive form with to: choose to stand, not choose stand. Also, the correction includes a before the singular countable noun journey. When describing one journey, say a quick journey; when speaking generally, you can say quick journeys.

× So many people choose stand for quick journey.

✓ So many people choose to stand for a quick journey.

The singular countable noun journey needs an article. Use a before journey because the sentence refers to one nonspecific journey. Remember to use a or an with singular countable nouns when they are introduced generally.