Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Zaman uyumuna dikkat etmelisin. Soru geçmiş zamanda “Did you have...?” şeklinde sorulduğu için “Yes, I did.” demelisin; “I have” şimdiki zamanı ifade eder. Cevabı bir neden veya kısa bir ayrıntıyla genişletirsen daha doğal ve etkili olur.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: Cevabın anlam açısından karışık ve soru şimdiki zamanda olduğu için “was/were” yerine “are” kullanmalısın. Ayrıca “car” yerine genel anlamda “cars” demelisin. Fikri doğrudan belirtip ardından neden veya karşılaştırma ekle: “Yes, bikes are quite popular, especially in cities, because they are cheap and convenient.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. However, cars are still more common because many people use them for long journeys and commuting.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question asks about a past situation: 'Did you have a bike?' Therefore, the answer should use the past auxiliary 'did', not the present-tense auxiliary 'have'. Use 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't' when answering a past-tense question beginning with 'Did'.

× Yes it was popular in the city but car wasn't popular

✓ Yes, they are popular in the city, but cars aren't popular.

The noun 'bikes' is plural, so it must be replaced by the plural pronoun 'they'. Also, 'car' is used to refer to cars in general, so the plural form 'cars' is more appropriate. Pay attention to whether the noun refers to one item or a general category.

× Yes it was popular in the city but car wasn't popular

✓ Yes, they are popular in the city, but cars aren't popular.

The question asks about the present: 'Do you think bikes are popular?' Therefore, the answer should use the present forms 'are' and 'aren't', not the past forms 'was' and 'wasn't'. Match the tense of your answer to the tense of the question.

× Yes it was popular in the city but car wasn't popular

✓ Yes, they are popular in the city, but cars aren't popular.

The pronoun 'it' refers to a singular noun, but 'bikes' is plural. The correct pronoun is 'they'. Use 'it' for one thing and 'they' for more than one thing.