Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Good job! - You answered quickly, but your response repeated the question instead of giving information. This makes it impossible to assess fluency, grammar, vocabulary, or coherence. Improvement suggestions: - Give a clear direct answer (yes/no) first, then add 1–2 supporting sentences with reasons or an example. - Use varied vocabulary (e.g., owned, had, rode, learned) and simple past tense for childhood events. - Keep it to 2–3 sentences, include a short detail (when, where, who taught you, or a memory). Improved example: - Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
No, actually I don't think so.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 10.0提案: Answer the question directly instead of using an unrelated phrase. Start with a clear answer such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific supporting details. Use the simple past tense to describe your childhood, and keep your response to two or three sentences.
例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 55.0提案: Your answer is relevant and grammatically understandable, but it is too brief and does not explain your opinion. After giving your direct answer, add a reason and a specific comparison or example. Use linking words such as “because,” “although,” or “for example” to make your response more coherent.
例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer to drive or use public transportation. Although some young people ride bikes for exercise, cycling is not a common way to commute, especially in large cities.
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