Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 没有回答考官的问题，而是重复了问题，因此无法展示内容、词汇和连贯性。应直接回答“有”或“没有”，并补充具体细节，例如使用时间、用途或骑车地点。注意时态：谈论童年经历时，应使用过去时“were”，而不是“are”。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and sometimes I went cycling with my friends at weekends.

提案: 没有表达自己的观点，而是重复了考官的问题。应先明确回答自行车是否流行，然后使用 because、especially 或 for example 等连接词补充原因和具体例子。可以提到共享单车、环保、通勤或健身等相关内容。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they are convenient, affordable, and environmentally friendly.

× Did you have a bike when you are a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

主句使用一般过去时“Did you have”，因为问题询问的是过去的经历。从句中的“when you are a child”也应使用一般过去时，改为“when you were a child”，表示“当你是个孩子时”。建议在谈论过去发生的事情时，保持相关从句的时态一致。