Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly and use the correct past tense: “I didn’t ride” rather than “I don’t ride.” The explanation about age restrictions is unclear and seems inaccurate; explain the real reason clearly. Avoid saying “Basically” when it does not add meaning, and use natural phrases such as “when I was a child” and “ride a bike.”

例: No, I didn’t ride a bike when I was a child. In my country, children usually need to be a certain age before they can ride on the roads, and my parents thought it was safer for me to walk or use public transport.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, then provide one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition, especially “easy easy,” and replace unnatural expressions such as “every individual can use bike” and “go there” with precise phrases like “people use bicycles for transportation” and “travel short distances.” Use linking words such as “also” or “as a result” to make the answer more coherent.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short journeys because they are affordable, convenient, and environmentally friendly. They can also help people avoid traffic and save time when travelling around busy cities.

× Basically I don't ride a bike when I was child because in my country there is very 18 plus or minimum 80 age of the person can drive that.

✓ Basically, I didn't ride a bike when I was a child because, in my country, the minimum age for riding a bike is 18.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Change don't ride to didn't ride. The phrase when I was a child also correctly refers to a past period.

× Basically I don't ride a bike when I was child because in my country there is very 18 plus or minimum 80 age of the person can drive that.

✓ Basically, I didn't ride a bike when I was a child because, in my country, the minimum age for riding a bike is 18.

The singular countable noun child needs the indefinite article a because it refers to one child in a general expression: when I was a child. The phrase minimum age also needs a clear noun structure, so use the minimum age for riding a bike is 18.

× Basically I don't ride a bike when I was child because in my country there is very 18 plus or minimum 80 age of the person can drive that.

✓ Basically, I didn't ride a bike when I was a child because, in my country, the minimum age for riding a bike is 18.

The original sentence has an unclear and incomplete structure in the part about the age requirement. Use the complete structure the minimum age for riding a bike is 18. This clearly expresses the age rule and avoids the incorrect sequence 18 plus or minimum 80 age of the person.

× Yes for sure, bikes are very popular in my country because every home has a bike now and every individual can use bike for their transportation because it is easy easy for you and it saves a lot of time to go there.

✓ Yes, for sure. Bikes are very popular in my country because every home has a bike, and everyone can use a bike for transportation because it is easy to use and saves a lot of time.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article after use: use a bike. The phrase transportation is being used generally, so it does not need their before it. Adding the article and improving the sentence structure makes the meaning clear.