Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 「I was practice」は文法的に誤りなので、「I practised riding it a lot」または「I spent a lot of time practising how to ride it」と言いましょう。また、「it is so difficult」は過去の話なので「it was quite difficult」にします。「helped put me to ride a bike」は不自然なため、「helped me learn to ride it」が適切です。最初に直接答え、その後に自転車の特徴や練習した理由を自然な順序で説明すると、より効果的です。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was small and blue, and I spent a lot of time practising how to ride it because I found it quite difficult at first. My parents helped me learn to ride it, so I gradually became more confident.

提案: 「there are a lot of people have bikes」は誤りなので、「a lot of people own bikes」または「many people have bikes」と言いましょう。「in the street or other situations」は曖昧で不自然なため、「on the streets, in parks, and for commuting」のように具体化してください。質問への答えなので、文末を疑問符ではなくピリオドにします。理由に加えて、通勤・運動・環境保護などの具体例を一つ加えると、内容がより明確になります。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people own them and ride them on the streets, in parks, or when commuting to work. They are especially common among students because they are convenient and relatively inexpensive.

× I was practice a lot of time to ride a bike because it is so difficult for me.

✓ I was practicing a lot to learn to ride a bike because it was very difficult for me.

After the past form of be, was, use the present participle form ending in -ing to make the past progressive: was practicing. Also, because the story is about the past, use was instead of is. Use practice a lot rather than practice a lot of time.

× I was practice a lot of time to ride a bike because it is so difficult for me.

✓ I practiced a lot to learn to ride a bike because it was very difficult for me.

The question asks about your childhood, so the past tense is needed. Use practiced instead of practice and was instead of is. A natural expression is practice a lot or practice for a long time.

× So my parents helped put me to ride a bike.

✓ So my parents helped me learn to ride a bike.

The structure help someone do something or help someone learn to do something is required. Do not use helped put me to ride in this context. The phrase helped me learn to ride a bike clearly expresses that your parents assisted you in learning.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because there are a lot of people have bikes and many people ride a bike in the street or other situations?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because a lot of people have bikes and many people ride bikes on the street or in other places.

There are must be followed by a noun phrase, not directly by a complete clause such as people have bikes. Remove there are and use a lot of people have bikes. Also, bikes is more natural than a bike when speaking about bicycles in general.