Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly and use the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Avoid fillers such as “like” and make the meaning clear. You could briefly explain why you did not have a bike, using one specific detail if possible.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on the busy roads near our home.

提案: Your answer gives a clear opinion and a reason, but it contains several grammar and word-choice errors. Use “bicycles are” instead of “with bicycle are,” and say “an affordable and convenient way” or “affordable and convenient ways.” Organize the response with a clear topic sentence followed by a specific supporting detail, such as who uses bikes or where they are commonly used.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. Many students and office workers use them to travel short distances, especially in crowded cities.

× No, I don't have like when I chat.

✓ No, I didn't have one when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use the past form didn't have instead of the present form don't have. The phrase when I chat is also not appropriate for describing childhood; use when I was a child.

× Of course, yes, with bicycle are really popular in my country because they aren't affordable and convenient way to get around.

✓ Of course, yes. Bicycles are really popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around.

Use the plural noun bicycles when speaking about bikes in general. Also, the sentence should begin with Bicycles as the subject instead of with bicycle.

× Of course, yes, with bicycle are really popular in my country because they aren't affordable and convenient way to get around.

✓ Of course, yes. Bicycles are really popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around.

The plural subject bicycles requires the plural verb are. The original sentence has an unclear subject and does not form a grammatically correct subject-verb relationship.

× Of course, yes, with bicycle are really popular in my country because they aren't affordable and convenient way to get around.

✓ Of course, yes. Bicycles are really popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around.

The singular countable noun way needs the indefinite article an before it. Because affordable begins with a vowel sound, use an affordable and convenient way.