Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Используйте прошедшее время, поскольку вопрос относится к детству: “I didn’t have” и “I didn’t like”. После “because” нужно дать естественную причину. Вместо неправильного “I haven’t enough money” скажите “my family couldn’t afford one” или “we didn’t have enough money”. Также используйте правильное число и артикль: “a bike”, а не “the bike”.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I wasn’t interested in cycling. Also, my family couldn’t afford one at the time.

提案: Начните с чёткого ответа и используйте правильное согласование: “bikes are popular”, а не “it’s popular”. Исправьте формы множественного числа: “children” и “teenagers”. Для логичной связи используйте “especially” и “because”. Вместо неестественной фразы “you can write on him” скажите “you can ride them”, а также добавьте конкретную причину или пример, например использование велосипедов для поездок на работу и учёбу.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among teenagers and adults. Many people use them to commute to work or school because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. They are also useful for exercise and short trips.

× No, I haven't because I never likes bikes and I haven't enough money to buy the bike.

✓ No, I didn't because I never liked bikes and I didn't have enough money to buy a bike.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use didn't instead of haven't and liked instead of likes. Also, a bike is used because the speaker is referring to one nonspecific bike.

× I never likes bikes

✓ I never liked bikes

The subject I cannot be followed by the third-person singular form likes. Because the sentence refers to the past, use the past-tense form liked, which is the same for all subjects.

× Yes, I think it's popular in my country for adults, for child, for teenagers sometimes and I think it's really useful thing by you can write on him.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular in my country among adults, children, and sometimes teenagers, and I think they are really useful because you can ride on them.

Bikes is plural, so use the pronoun they rather than it. The pronoun him is used for a male person, but bikes are non-human plural nouns, so use them. Make sure pronouns agree with the nouns they refer to.

× for child

✓ for children

The sentence refers to children in general, so the plural form children is required. Child is singular, while children is its irregular plural form.

× by you can write on him

✓ because you can ride on them

By cannot introduce a reason in this sentence. Use the conjunction because to explain why bikes are useful. Also, ride is the appropriate verb for using a bike.

× it's really useful thing

✓ they are really useful things

A singular countable noun such as thing needs an article, for example a useful thing. However, because the subject is bikes, it is more natural and grammatically consistent to use the plural form useful things.

× you can write on him

✓ you can ride on them

The preposition and verb combination write on does not express using a bike. Use ride on a bike or ride a bike. The pronoun should also be them because it refers to plural bikes.