Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答了问题，但有明显的语法和表达问题。应说“when I was nine years old”，而不是“when I were nine years old”；“learned how to ride a bike”比“learned how to biking”自然；“my parents gave it to me”要使用过去时。建议用“直接回答＋具体细节＋感受”的结构，并减少“uh”等停顿词。

例: Yes, I did. My parents gave me my first bike when I was nine years old, and that was when I learned how to ride a bike. I often rode it around my neighborhood, so I have very happy memories of it.

提案: 回答基本切题，也提供了身边的例子，但有多处词汇和搭配错误。“bug”应改为“bike”，“you can say”应改为“you can see”，“They park in the park”应改为“they ride their bikes in the park”。建议加入连接词（如“for example”和“especially”），并说明骑自行车受欢迎的原因，例如锻炼、娱乐或环保。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, the park near my house is usually full of cyclists in the evening, especially children and teenagers. Many people ride bikes there for exercise and fun, and some also use them as an environmentally friendly way to travel.

× That's when I were nine years old.

✓ That was when I was nine years old.

主语是第一人称单数“I”，过去时中应使用“was”，不能使用“were”。同时，前面谈论的是过去的经历，所以“That was”与过去时间保持一致。

× I firstly learned how to, uh, how to biking.

✓ I first learned how to ride a bike.

“how to”后面必须接动词原形，不能接动词的-ing形式。因此，“how to biking”应改为“how to bike”或更自然的“how to ride a bike”。另外，“first”比“firstly”更自然地修饰“learned”。

× So my parents give me.

✓ So my parents gave me one.

这段经历发生在过去，所以动词“give”应使用过去式“gave”。“give”还需要一个宾语；根据上下文，补充“one”指代前面提到的自行车。