Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng mắc nhiều lỗi về từ vựng, ngữ pháp và độ tự nhiên. Cụm “A4 wheel bike” nên sửa thành “a four-wheeled bike” hoặc “a bike with four wheels”; “I'm not usually using it” nên dùng thì quá khứ “I didn't use it very often”; và “don't really know” cần đổi thành “didn't really know” để phù hợp với “when I was a child”. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời bị ngắt quãng ở “and or download”, có thể loại bỏ hoàn toàn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm một lý do hoặc chi tiết cụ thể, đồng thời dùng “because” để liên kết ý.

例: Yes, I had a four-wheeled bike when I was a child. However, I didn’t use it very often because I wasn’t particularly interested in cycling. I also didn’t know how to ride a regular two-wheeled bike.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm và đưa ra một số ví dụ, nhưng có nhiều lỗi về phát âm/ghi âm từ vựng và ngữ pháp. “buys” cần sửa thành “bikes”; “I usually saw” nên là “I usually see”; “using bike” cần đổi thành “using bikes” hoặc “riding bikes”; và “to write to their location” nên là “to travel to their destinations”. Cụm “using it to do the exercise morning” nên sửa thành “using them to exercise in the morning”. Hãy dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu hai nhóm người sử dụng xe đạp và liên kết bằng “for example” hoặc “in addition”.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who want to exercise. For example, many students ride bikes to school because it is affordable and convenient. In addition, some adults cycle in the morning to stay fit and avoid traffic.

× I used to have a bike A4 wheel bike when I was a child but I'm not usually using it because I'm not interested in riding bike and or download don't really know how to ride a bike.

✓ I used to have a four-wheeled bike when I was a child, but I did not usually use it because I was not interested in riding a bike, and I did not really know how to ride a bike.

The answer refers to the student’s childhood, so past-tense forms are needed: did not usually use, was not interested, and did not really know. Keep the verb tense consistent when describing past habits and past states.

× I used to have a bike A4 wheel bike when I was a child but I'm not usually using it because I'm not interested in riding bike and or download don't really know how to ride a bike.

✓ I used to have a four-wheeled bike when I was a child, but I did not usually use it because I was not interested in riding a bike, and I did not really know how to ride a bike.

Use a before singular countable nouns when mentioning one non-specific item: a four-wheeled bike and a bike. The phrase A4 wheel bike should be changed to four-wheeled bike. Do not use the before bike in the general expression ride a bike.

× In my opinion buys are popular in my country. I usually saw students using bike to ride to the school or people. Many people using it to write to their location they want and using it to do the exercise morning.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country. I usually see students riding bikes to school. Many people use bikes to travel to their destinations and to exercise in the morning.

Use the plural noun bikes when speaking about bicycles in general. Also, bikes should be plural after students because students may ride more than one bike. Use destinations instead of the incorrect singular expression their location they want.

× In my opinion buys are popular in my country. I usually saw students using bike to ride to the school or people. Many people using it to write to their location they want and using it to do the exercise morning.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country. I usually see students riding bikes to school. Many people use bikes to travel to their destinations and to exercise in the morning.

The question asks about general opinions and regular activities, so use the present simple: are, see, and use. Saw is past tense, while using by itself cannot function as the main verb in Many people using it.

× In my opinion buys are popular in my country. I usually saw students using bike to ride to the school or people. Many people using it to write to their location they want and using it to do the exercise morning.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country. I usually see students riding bikes to school. Many people use bikes to travel to their destinations and to exercise in the morning.

After see, use the object plus the -ing form to describe an action in progress: see students riding bikes. The original phrase using bike to ride is unnecessarily complicated. Use riding bikes instead.

× In my opinion buys are popular in my country. I usually saw students using bike to ride to the school or people. Many people using it to write to their location they want and using it to do the exercise morning.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country. I usually see students riding bikes to school. Many people use bikes to travel to their destinations and to exercise in the morning.

Use travel to a destination, not write to a location. The correct phrase is in the morning, not exercise morning. The preposition to is also used in ride to school.

× In my opinion buys are popular in my country. I usually saw students using bike to ride to the school or people. Many people using it to write to their location they want and using it to do the exercise morning.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country. I usually see students riding bikes to school. Many people use bikes to travel to their destinations and to exercise in the morning.

When talking about school as a general activity or destination, omit the: go or ride to school. Use the definite article in the morning because this is a fixed expression referring to a specific part of the day. Do not use the before exercise when exercise is used as an uncountable activity.

× In my opinion buys are popular in my country. I usually saw students using bike to ride to the school or people. Many people using it to write to their location they want and using it to do the exercise morning.

✓ In my opinion, bikes are popular in my country. I usually see students riding bikes to school. Many people use bikes to travel to their destinations and to exercise in the morning.

Many people using it is not a complete sentence because it lacks a finite main verb. Use Many people use bikes. The phrase to write to their location they want is also incorrectly structured; use to travel to their destinations. Build each sentence with a clear subject, verb, and object or complement.