Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本直接，但“I was a child”前缺少连接词，应该说“when I was a child”。此外，答案只有一个简单事实，缺乏具体细节。可以补充自行车的颜色、使用时间或骑车的地点，使回答更自然、更完整。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: 回答没有清楚回应“自行车在你国家是否流行”，并且存在多处语法问题，例如“I am fourteen years old”与问题无关，“I not popular my country”应改为“bikes are not very popular in my country”。建议先明确表达观点，再给出一个具体原因或例子，并使用完整句子。

例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer using cars or public transportation because they are faster and more convenient, especially for long distances.

× Yes, I had a bike I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

“I was a child”是一个完整的从句，需要用连词“when”连接主句和时间从句。“when I was a child”表示“当我还是个孩子时”。建议记住：表达“当……时”时，通常使用“when”。

× no, I am fourteen years old so I not popular my country.

✓ No, bikes are not popular in my country.

问题询问的是自行车是否受欢迎，因此主语应该是复数名词“bikes”，对应的系动词应使用“are”，而不是使用不完整的“I not”。否定句中应使用“are not”。回答问题时，要确保主语与问题中的主题保持一致，并注意主语和动词在人称、数上的一致。

× no, I am fourteen years old so I not popular my country.

✓ No, bikes are not popular in my country.

表示“在我的国家”时，需要在“my country”前使用介词“in”，构成“in my country”。建议记住：表示地点或范围时，通常使用“in”，例如“in my country”和“in my city”。