Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本直接，也提供了骑车的活动和发现城市细节等具体信息，内容较充实。但存在明显的语法、搭配和时态问题：应说“a bike that my parents bought for me”，而不是“which bought my my parents”；“rode a bike”应改为“rode our bikes”；过去经历应统一使用过去时，如“enjoyed”“had”。此外，句子过长，可以用“because”或“and”自然连接，并避免重复表达“in my childhood”和“the time we have”。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with them. I really enjoyed exploring the city because I could discover small gardens and new shops.

提案: 回答表达了明确观点，并给出了台湾人更常开车或骑摩托车的原因。不过开头缺少标点和自然连接，应说“Actually, not really”或“Not particularly”；“drive car”应为“drive cars”，且“roll the scooter”不是自然搭配，应改为“ride scooters”。“our city is big”过于笼统，可以说明城市交通距离较远、摩托车更方便；同时应使用更准确的表达，如“it’s more convenient for commuting”。

例: Not particularly. In Taiwan, many people prefer driving cars or riding scooters because the cities can be quite spread out and scooters are convenient for commuting. Bikes are still popular for exercise and short trips, but they are not the main form of transportation for most people.

× Yes, I had a bike in my childhood which bought my my parents and we usually rode a bike around the city and I really enjoy the time we have because I can discover more in the city like a little garden or a new store.

✓ Yes, I had a bike in my childhood which was bought by my parents, and we usually rode a bike around the city. I really enjoyed the time we had because I could discover more in the city, such as a little garden or a new store.

“自行车是被父母买的”，所以需要使用被动语态“was bought”，而不能使用主动语态“bought”。正确结构是“主语 + was/were + 过去分词 + by + 执行者”。同时删除重复的“my”。

× Yes, I had a bike in my childhood which bought my my parents and we usually rode a bike around the city and I really enjoy the time we have because I can discover more in the city like a little garden or a new store.

✓ Yes, I had a bike in my childhood which was bought by my parents, and we usually rode a bike around the city. I really enjoyed the time we had because I could discover more in the city, such as a little garden or a new store.

问题描述的是童年时期的经历，因此相关动词应该使用过去时。“enjoy”应改为“enjoyed”，“have”应改为“had”。回答过去经历时，要保持时态一致。

× Yes, I had a bike in my childhood which bought my my parents and we usually rode a bike around the city and I really enjoy the time we have because I can discover more in the city like a little garden or a new store.

✓ Yes, I had a bike in my childhood which was bought by my parents, and we usually rode a bike around the city. I really enjoyed the time we had because I could discover more in the city, such as a little garden or a new store.

这里谈论的是过去的童年经历，所以情态动词“can”应改为过去形式“could”。“could discover”表示“能够发现”，与过去时间背景一致。

× Actually not I live in Taiwan and we used to drive car or ride a motorcycle because our city is big and it will be more convenient if we roll the scooter.

✓ Actually, no. I live in Taiwan, and we used to drive a car or ride a motorcycle because our city is big and it is more convenient if we roll the scooter.

可数名词“car”是单数，前面需要冠词，因此“drive car”应改为“drive a car”。单数可数名词通常不能单独使用。

× Actually not I live in Taiwan and we used to drive car or ride a motorcycle because our city is big and it will be more convenient if we roll the scooter.

✓ Actually, no. I live in Taiwan, and we used to drive a car or ride a motorcycle because our city is big and it is more convenient if we roll the scooter.

这里是在说明台湾目前的交通情况，而不是未来的情况，所以“will be”应改为一般现在时“is”。描述现在普遍存在的事实或情况时，应使用一般现在时。