Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly and avoid the hesitation at the end. Use the correct expression “ride a bike,” and add one specific detail, such as whether you learned later or how you travelled as a child. A clear structure would be: direct answer + reason + supporting detail.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I didn’t know how to ride one. I was also a little afraid of falling, so I usually walked or took the bus. I learned to ride a bike when I was about twelve.

提案: Give a complete and grammatically accurate answer. Say “Bicycles are very popular in my country” rather than “bicycle or very popular inner country.” Explain the reason clearly using a linking word such as “because” or “also,” and provide a specific example. Avoid repeated words and unfinished phrases such as “so so so every people.”

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use them because the roads are often crowded and cycling is a convenient way to travel short distances. In addition, some people ride bikes for exercise and to reduce pollution.

× I did not have a bike when I was a child because I did not know how to ride bike.

✓ I did not have a bike when I was a child because I did not know how to ride a bike.

The singular countable noun bike needs the indefinite article a when referring to one bike in general. Use the expression ride a bike.

× Yes, yes, bicycle or very popular inner country, umm, because umm, nowadays traffic is on the road, so so so every people.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because there is a lot of traffic on the roads nowadays, so many people choose to ride them.

Bicycles refers to more than one bicycle, so the plural form bicycles is needed instead of bicycle. The quantifier many is used with the plural countable noun people; every cannot be used directly with people in this sentence.

× Yes, yes, bicycle or very popular inner country, umm, because umm, nowadays traffic is on the road, so so so every people.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because there is a lot of traffic on the roads nowadays, so many people choose to ride them.

The plural subject bicycles must take the plural verb are, not the singular verb is. Subject and verb must agree in number.

× Yes, yes, bicycle or very popular inner country, umm, because umm, nowadays traffic is on the road, so so so every people.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because there is a lot of traffic on the roads nowadays, so many people choose to ride them.

Use the preposition in when referring to a country: in my country. The word inner is not the correct preposition in this context.

× Yes, yes, bicycle or very popular inner country, umm, because umm, nowadays traffic is on the road, so so so every people.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because there is a lot of traffic on the roads nowadays, so many people choose to ride them.

People is a plural countable noun, so many people is appropriate. Every must be followed by a singular noun, such as every person.

× Yes, yes, bicycle or very popular inner country, umm, because umm, nowadays traffic is on the road, so so so every people.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because there is a lot of traffic on the roads nowadays, and many people choose to ride them.

Because and so should not normally be used together to connect the same cause-and-effect relationship. Use because to introduce the reason, and use and to connect the resulting idea in this sentence.

× Yes, yes, bicycle or very popular inner country, umm, because umm, nowadays traffic is on the road, so so so every people.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because there is a lot of traffic on the roads nowadays, so many people choose to ride them.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains repeated fillers and an unfinished idea. A complete sentence needs a clear subject, verb, and logical ending. A useful speaking pattern is Bicycles are popular because..., so many people....