Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ дан прямо, но есть грамматическая ошибка: после “I” нужно использовать “was”, а не “were” — “when I was a child”. Для более полного и естественного ответа добавьте краткую причину или связанное объяснение, используя “because”.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe to ride on the busy streets near our home.

提案: Основная идея понятна, но ответ содержит много ошибок в словах и грамматике. Используйте “bikes are popular in my country”, а не “Bai is a popular admin country”; “fun” вместо “funny”; “among boys, girls, and adults” вместо “for boys, girls and wear adults”. Также добавьте конкретную причину или пример и соедините идеи связующим словом, например “because” или “especially”.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel. They are especially common among children and young adults, who often ride them in parks or around their neighborhoods.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I were a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The verb be must be in the past tense because the sentence refers to childhood. The correct past form with the subject I is was, not were. Practice the past forms of be: I was and you/he/she/it was; you/we/they were.

× Yeah, I think Bai is a popular admin country because it's funny for boys, girls and wear adults.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are fun for boys, girls, and adults.

The phrase admin country is not grammatically correct. The preposition in is needed before my country: popular in my country. Also, Bai and wear appear to be transcription errors; in this context, they should be bikes and and.

× Yeah, I think Bai is a popular admin country because it's funny for boys, girls and wear adults.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are fun for boys, girls, and adults.

The pronoun it refers to a singular noun, but bikes is plural. Therefore, use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are: they are fun. Make sure that pronouns agree with the nouns they refer to.

× Yeah, I think Bai is a popular admin country because it's funny for boys, girls and wear adults.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are fun for boys, girls, and adults.

Funny usually means amusing or humorous, while fun describes an enjoyable activity or thing. Because riding bikes is enjoyable, fun is the more natural word here. Use fun to describe activities that people enjoy.

× Yeah, I think Bai is a popular admin country because it's funny for boys, girls and wear adults.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are fun for boys, girls, and adults.

The phrase wear adults is not grammatical. The conjunction and is needed to connect the final item in the list: boys, girls, and adults. Use and to join words or phrases of equal grammatical function.