Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，也提供了年龄、地点和经历，但存在明显的时态、搭配和句子组织问题。应将现在时“have/write”改为过去时“had/rode”，并使用更自然的表达，如“ride my bike to the park”和“fell off my bike”。避免重复“I”，并用“However”连接摔倒和后来不喜欢骑车这两个信息。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. When I was seven, I rode it to a park near my home, but I fell off and hurt myself. After that, I became afraid of riding, so I gradually lost interest in it.

提案: 回答没有清楚回应问题，开头使用了不礼貌且不恰当的表达；后面的内容也基本无法理解，缺少明确观点、原因和具体细节。应先直接回答“是”或“不是”，然后说明原因，并举出与交通、健康或休闲相关的例子。注意使用准确、相关的词汇，避免无意义或听不懂的词语。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and people who live in smaller cities. They are convenient and inexpensive, and many people also ride them for exercise. However, in large cities, some people prefer cars or public transportation because of heavy traffic and long distances.

× Yes, yes I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题使用了现在完成时“have”，但考官的问题是一般过去时“Did you have...?”，回答也应使用过去时。这里用“Yes, I did.”来与问题的时态保持一致。

× And when I was seven years old, I write it to my park near my home

✓ When I was seven years old, I rode it to the park near my home.

“was”表示过去时间，所以后面的动作也要使用过去时。“write”的过去式是“wrote”，但骑自行车应使用“rode”。另外，“ride”后面通常用“to”表示骑车去某地。

× and I and I drop down

✓ and I fell down

“drop”是现在时，描述童年发生的事情时应使用过去时。“fall”的过去式是不规则变化“fell”，所以应说“I fell down”。

× and after that I just hate riding.

✓ and after that, I just hated riding.

“after that”说明这是过去发生的事情，因此“hate”应改为过去式“hated”。“hate riding”中的“riding”使用正确，因为“hate”后面可以接动名词。

× What the hell are you talking?

✓ What the hell are you talking about?

动词短语“talk about”表示“谈论某事”。“talk”后面需要介词“about”，所以应说“What are you talking about?”。不过在考试中，“What the hell...”语气比较粗鲁，建议使用更礼貌的表达：“What do you mean?”