Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer in the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Use “I didn’t have” rather than “I have not,” and say “when I was a child,” not “when I was in a child.” Add a brief reason or detail to make the answer more complete and natural.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride one on the busy roads near our home, so I usually walked or took the bus.

提案: Start with a clear answer such as “Yes, I think they are quite popular.” Avoid the unnatural phrase “more popular rather than a car”; use “more popular than cars” or explain that bikes are becoming more popular. Support your opinion with a specific reason or example, and use linking words such as “because” or “for example.”

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They are cheaper and more environmentally friendly than cars, and many people use them for short journeys or to exercise.

× No, I have not a bike when I was in a child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so the verb must be in the simple past. Use did not have, not have not. The expression when I was a child is the correct way to describe someone's childhood.

× No, I have not a bike when I was in a child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs the indefinite article a. The correct expression is a child, not in a child.

× Honestly, especially in my country, yes bikes are more popular rather than a car.

✓ Honestly, bikes are more popular than cars in my country.

The comparative structure is more + adjective + than, not more + adjective + rather than. Also, when making a general comparison between types of vehicles, use the plural form cars.

× Honestly, especially in my country, yes bikes are more popular rather than a car.

✓ Honestly, bikes are more popular than cars in my country.

Bikes refers to bicycles in general, so the comparison should use the plural noun cars rather than the singular phrase a car. This creates a clear comparison between two categories.