Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct and grammatically correct, but it is too brief to fully develop your response. Add a short reason or a relevant detail, such as explaining whether you preferred another activity or why you did not need a bike. One or two sentences would be enough.

例: No, I didn’t. My parents thought cycling was a little dangerous, so I usually walked or played sports with my friends instead.

提案: Answer the question directly by saying whether bikes are popular, then support your opinion with a clear reason or specific example. Avoid incorrect phrases such as “you are most popular,” “everyone choose,” and “under the experience to what they enjoy.” Use “bikes are popular,” “everyone chooses,” and linking words such as “because” or “for example.” Keep the answer natural and within two or three sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. Many people choose to cycle because it is affordable, convenient, and better for the environment.

× Yeah, you are most popular in our country because everyone choose to ride a bike under the experience to what they enjoy like that.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in our country because everyone chooses to ride a bike based on what they enjoy.

The pronoun you incorrectly refers to bikes, but you refers to the person being addressed. Use bikes as the subject because the question asks whether bikes are popular.

× Yeah, you are most popular in our country because everyone choose to ride a bike under the experience to what they enjoy like that.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in our country because everyone chooses to ride a bike based on what they enjoy.

Everyone is grammatically singular, so the verb must be chooses, not choose, in the present tense.

× Yeah, you are most popular in our country because everyone choose to ride a bike under the experience to what they enjoy like that.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in our country because everyone chooses to ride a bike based on what they enjoy.

The preposition under is not appropriate in this context. Use based on to express the idea that people's choice depends on their preferences or experience.

× Yeah, you are most popular in our country because everyone choose to ride a bike under the experience to what they enjoy like that.

✓ Yeah, bikes are very popular in our country because everyone chooses to ride a bike based on what they enjoy.

The phrase under the experience to what they enjoy like that is not structured correctly and is difficult to understand. A clearer structure is because everyone chooses to ride a bike based on what they enjoy.