Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it, so your response does not communicate your personal experience. Begin with a direct answer such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific details, such as when you received the bike, where you rode it, or how often you used it. Use a linking word such as “because” or “so” to connect your ideas naturally.

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about seven. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends, so it became one of my favorite activities.

提案: You repeated the examiner's question rather than expressing an opinion, so the answer lacks relevant content. Start with a clear response such as “Yes, I think they are quite popular,” and support it with specific reasons or examples. You could mention who uses bikes, where they are commonly ridden, or how cycling helps people avoid traffic and save money.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in large cities. Many people use them for short journeys because they are affordable and help them avoid traffic. In addition, cycling has become more popular as people have become more concerned about their health and the environment.