Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接回答了问题，也提供了使用自行车的场景，但“write it”应改为“ride it”。“go to school and go out somewhere”表达不够自然，可以改为“ride it to school or around my neighborhood”。建议使用过去时，并补充一个具体细节或原因，使答案更完整、自然。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to school and around my neighborhood. It was very convenient, and I enjoyed riding it with my friends after school.

提案: 答案没有清楚地使用现在时回答“现在自行车是否流行”，而是转到童年时期；“the bikes are popular”应改为“bikes are popular”，“use it”应改为“use them”。最后一句“ When to walk, when to school”意思不清，建议用完整句子说明人们骑车的场景，并使用“because”“especially”等连接词组织原因和例子。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in big cities. Many people ride them to school or work because they are cheap and convenient. In addition, cycling helps people avoid traffic jams and stay healthy.

× I often write it, go to school and go out somewhere.

✓ I often rode it to school and went out somewhere.

“when I was a child”表示过去时间，因此后面的动作也应使用一般过去时。“ride”的过去式是“rode”，“go”的过去式是“went”。此外，“write”在这里不符合语境，应使用“ride”表示“骑自行车”。

× When I was young, the bikes are popular in my country, so many people use it.

✓ When I was young, bikes were popular in my country, so many people used them.

“When I was young”指过去的时间，所以“are”应改为“were”，“use”应改为“used”。描述过去发生的普遍情况时，相关动词通常都要使用过去时。

× When I was young, the bikes are popular in my country, so many people use it.

✓ When I was young, bikes were popular in my country, so many people used them.

“bikes”是复数名词，因此代词不能使用单数的“it”，应使用复数代词“them”。代词的单复数必须与它所指代的名词保持一致。

× When I was young, the bikes are popular in my country, so many people use it.

✓ When I was young, bikes were popular in my country, so many people used them.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，不是指特定的几辆自行车，所以不应使用定冠词“the”。复数名词表示泛指时，通常可以不加冠词。

× When to walk, when to school.

✓ Instead of walking, many people rode bikes to school.

原句没有完整的主语和谓语动词，不能构成完整句子。表达“而不是步行去学校”时，可以使用“Instead of walking”，并补充主语“many people”和谓语“rode”。