Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating or reformulating it. Also, use the correct phrase “when you were a child,” not “when you wear A tag.” Give a clear yes/no answer and add one specific detail, such as how often you rode the bike or who gave it to you.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Respond to the question by expressing your opinion rather than repeating the examiner's words. Begin with a direct answer, such as “Yes, I think they are quite popular,” and support it with a specific reason or example. Use a linking word such as “because” or “especially” to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. They are especially common among students and people who want to avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bike when you wear A tag?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The verb wear is incorrect here. The sentence refers to a past situation, and the verb be must be in the past tense: were. The phrase A tag is also corrected to a child so that the sentence matches the intended question.