Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan “Yes” diyerek başlıyor; ancak zaman ve cümle yapısı hataları anlamı zorlaştırıyor. “When I were a child” yerine “When I was a child” kullanılmalı; geçmişteki bisikleti anlatırken “It has” değil, “It had” denmelidir. “Four-wheel denim block” ve “I can't ride bike three wheel” ifadeleri doğal ve anlaşılır değil; muhtemelen “training wheels” (denge tekerlekleri) demek istediniz. Cevabı 2–3 açık cümleyle tamamlayarak bisikletin rengi, denge tekerlekleri ve bisiklet sürme deneyiminiz hakkında net bir ayrıntı verin.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was blue and had training wheels because I couldn’t balance very well at first. I learned to ride it after a few weeks.

提案: Fikriniz ve nedenleriniz uygun; özellikle düşük maliyet ve trafikten kaçınma noktaları iyi seçilmiş. Ancak “handling” yerine “convenient” veya “easy to use”, “off wage workers” yerine muhtemelen “office workers”, “get university” yerine “get to university” ve “expense” yerine “work” kullanılmalı. “Use the bikes” yerine genel bir alışkanlık anlatırken “use bikes” daha doğaldır. Cevabınızı topic sentence + neden + somut örnek biçiminde düzenleyin ve “For example” gibi bağlaçları doğru kullanın.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. They also help people avoid heavy traffic. For example, many students and office workers ride bikes to university or work.

× When I were a child it was blue.

✓ When I was a child, it was blue.

The sentence refers to a past time. The verb be must agree with the subject I, so use was, not were. Use the pattern I was + complement for past descriptions.

× It has a four wheel denim block.

✓ It had a four-wheel denim block.

The answer is describing the bike in the past, so has should be changed to had. Four-wheel should be hyphenated when it is used as a compound adjective before a noun.

× The wheel.

✓ It had three wheels.

The original expression is a sentence fragment because it has no verb. Use a complete sentence with a subject and a verb, such as It had three wheels.

× I can't ride bike three wheel.

✓ I couldn't ride a three-wheeled bike.

Because the answer describes the speaker's childhood, use the past modal could not, contracted as couldn't, instead of can't. The sentence also needs the article a and the correctly ordered compound adjective three-wheeled before bike.

× They are cheap and handling for short trips.

✓ They are cheap and convenient for short trips.

Handling is not the correct adjective for describing something that is easy or useful to use. Convenient is the appropriate adjective after the linking verb are. Use parallel adjectives in the structure they are cheap and convenient.

× Many students and off wage workers use the bikes to get university.

✓ Many students and office workers use bikes to get to university.

The preposition to is required after get when referring to a destination: get to university. The phrase office workers is the standard expression. The article is not normally used before bikes when speaking about bikes in general.