Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use the past tense consistently because you are talking about childhood: say “I had,” not “I do have.” Add one specific detail, such as how often you used the bike or where you rode it. A linking word such as “Usually” or “For example” can make the answer more developed and natural.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too brief and repeats the wording of the question. Give a reason and a specific example, such as cycling for exercise, commuting, or avoiding traffic. Use a linking word like “because” to connect your ideas clearly.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and inexpensive. For example, many people cycle to work or use shared bikes to avoid heavy traffic.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, when you were a child, so the verb must be in the simple past tense. Use had instead of do have because do have is present tense.