Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You did not answer the examiner's question; instead, you repeated it. Begin with a direct answer such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific details about the bike, how often you used it, or where you rode it.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: You answered the question directly and gave reasons, but “computer popular” is incorrect and unclear; use “quite popular” or “particularly popular.” Avoid repeating “because” in one long sentence by using a linking word such as “In addition” or “Moreover.” You could also make the answer more specific by mentioning who uses bikes or where they ride them.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. In addition, many people ride them for exercise, especially in parks and residential areas.

× Well, yes, I think bikes are computer popular because they're cheap and lots of people like to ride bikes because it's a kind of exercise too.

✓ Well, yes, I think bikes are particularly popular because they're cheap, and lots of people like to ride bikes because it's a kind of exercise too.

Computer is not the correct adverb in this sentence. Use particularly to emphasize the adjective popular. The rest of the sentence is grammatically acceptable. To improve clarity, you could also say, Bikes are particularly popular because they are cheap, and riding them is a form of exercise.