Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但语法和表达不够自然。“tried sometimes”应改为“sometimes tried”，“get used to it”在这里不如“learn to ride it”准确；“I have a experience”应改为“I gained experience”或“I learned how to ride it”。建议使用过去时，并补充一个具体细节，例如谁教你骑车、在哪里骑或骑车时的感受。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was six. At first, I found it difficult to balance, but my father taught me how to ride it in a nearby park. After a few weeks of practice, I became confident and really enjoyed cycling.

提案: 回答没有直接清楚地说明现在自行车是否流行，而且“at nineteen fifties”与一般现在时问题不匹配，可能表达的是“in the 1950s”。“our country is just built”表达不自然，应改为“the country was still developing”；“at a initial stage”应改为“at an initial stage”。建议先明确回答现在的情况，再补充过去与现在的对比及具体原因。

例: Yes, bikes are still quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who use them for exercise. In the 1950s, they were even more common because the country was still developing and cars were less affordable. Nowadays, however, many people prefer public transport or electric scooters.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was six and I tried sometimes to get used to it and finally I have a experience on how to use a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was six, and I sometimes tried to get used to it. Finally, I gained experience in using a bike.

频率副词“sometimes”通常放在实义动词前面，因此应说“I sometimes tried”，而不是“I tried sometimes”。建议记住：主语 + 频率副词 + 实义动词。

× Yes, I had a bike when I was six and I tried sometimes to get used to it and finally I have a experience on how to use a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was six, and I sometimes tried to get used to it. Finally, I gained experience in using a bike.

整句话讲的是童年时期的经历，时间在过去，所以不能使用现在时“have”。应使用过去时，例如“gained”或“had”。建议叙述过去经历时，保持动词时态一致。

× Yes, I had a bike when I was six and I tried sometimes to get used to it and finally I have a experience on how to use a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was six, and I sometimes tried to get used to it. Finally, I gained experience in using a bike.

“experience”在这里表示学习骑车所获得的经验，是不可数名词，通常不和“a”连用。“a experience”本身也不符合冠词规则，因为元音音素前应使用“an”，但本句最自然的表达是“gained experience”。

× I think bikes are popular in my country at nineteen fifties maybe because that time our country is just built and the its development is at a initial stage.

✓ I think bikes were popular in my country in the 1950s, maybe because at that time our country was just being built and its development was at an initial stage.

表示某个年代应使用介词“in”，所以应说“in the 1950s”，而不是“at nineteen fifties”。“that time”前也需要介词“at”，正确表达是“at that time”。

× I think bikes are popular in my country at nineteen fifties maybe because that time our country is just built and the its development is at a initial stage.

✓ I think bikes were popular in my country in the 1950s, maybe because at that time our country was just being built and its development was at an initial stage.

表示特定年代时通常使用定冠词“the”，所以应说“the 1950s”。但是在物主限定词“its”前不能再使用“the”，因此“the its development”应改为“its development”。

× I think bikes are popular in my country at nineteen fifties maybe because that time our country is just built and the its development is at a initial stage.

✓ I think bikes were popular in my country in the 1950s, maybe because at that time our country was just being built and its development was at an initial stage.

“the 1950s”和“at that time”都指过去的时间，因此“are”应改为过去时“were”，“is”应改为“was”。建议看到明确的过去时间表达时，相关动词使用过去时。

× I think bikes are popular in my country at nineteen fifties maybe because that time our country is just built and the its development is at a initial stage.

✓ I think bikes were popular in my country in the 1950s, maybe because at that time our country was just being built and its development was at an initial stage.

“our country”是“建设”这一动作的承受者，所以需要使用被动语态。“is just built”不能准确表达当时正在建设，正确形式是过去进行时的被动语态“was just being built”。

× I think bikes are popular in my country at nineteen fifties maybe because that time our country is just built and the its development is at a initial stage.

✓ I think bikes were popular in my country in the 1950s, maybe because at that time our country was just being built and its development was at an initial stage.

“initial”以元音音素开头，所以前面的不定冠词应使用“an”，而不是“a”。正确表达是“an initial stage”。