Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Start with a clear response such as “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” and then add one or two specific details, such as how often you used the bike or where you rode it.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about eight years old, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Give a clear opinion and support it with a natural, specific reason. Use linking words such as “because” or “however,” and avoid unnatural phrases like “are absolutely for the children” and “analysis reason can be answered to this question.” Also, say “mainly used by children” rather than suggesting that adults do not use bikes at all.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most adults prefer to drive cars, especially for commuting. However, bicycles are quite common among children and are also becoming more popular for exercise and leisure.

× Bikes are absolutely for the children, not the adults.

✓ Bikes are mainly for children, not adults.

When speaking about children and adults in general, do not use the definite article the. The phrase mainly for is also more natural than absolutely for in this context.

× analysis reason can be answered to this question.

✓ This is the reason for my answer.

The original phrase does not form a natural or complete English sentence. Use the complete structure This is the reason for my answer to explain why you gave your opinion.