Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Используйте прошедшее время: вопрос относится к детству, поэтому вместо “I have not” лучше сказать “I didn’t have one”. Ответ в целом понятен и прямой, но повторение “no” и “bike” делает его менее естественным. Добавьте одну конкретную причину или деталь, например, почему у вас не было велосипеда.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe to ride on the busy roads near our home, so I usually played football with my friends instead.

提案: Сформулируйте ответ более связно: сначала выразите мнение, затем сравните маленькие города с Баку и объясните причину. Избегайте повторов “like”, “probably” и “I don’t think”, а также исправьте грамматику: “people use them”, а не “nobody like use it”. Используйте точные выражения, например “among children and teenagers” и “heavy traffic makes cycling difficult”.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Azerbaijan, especially in Baku. They may be more common among children and teenagers in smaller towns, where the roads are quieter. However, in the capital, heavy traffic and a lack of dedicated cycle lanes make cycling less convenient.

× Umm no I umm have not.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question asks about a past situation, so the answer should use the past auxiliary did. Use didn't have or didn't instead of the present perfect form have not.

× Probably in in small towns, like it's popular around like children or teenagers.

✓ Bikes are probably popular in small towns, especially among children and teenagers.

The preposition in was repeated accidentally. Among is more appropriate when referring to a group of people. The sentence is also clearer when it begins with the subject Bikes.

× But like for example, in Baku, it's the capital of Azerbaijan.

✓ For example, Baku is the capital of Azerbaijan.

The original sentence incorrectly combines Baku with it's the capital. Use Baku is the capital to form a complete and grammatically correct sentence. Avoid unnecessary fillers such as like and but in formal answers.

× Nobody like use it.

✓ Nobody likes to use them.

Nobody is grammatically singular, so the verb must be likes, not like. After likes, use the infinitive form to use. Because bikes are plural, use the pronoun them instead of it.

× Nobody like use it.

✓ Nobody likes to use them.

The pronoun it refers to one thing, but the speaker is referring to bikes in general. Use the plural pronoun them.