Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答结构清晰，先直接回答“没有”，再解释学习骑车的时间、原因和结果，内容也比较具体。不过需要改进语法和搭配：应说“when I was a child”，过去经历中的“practice”应改为“practiced”，表达学习骑车时应使用“learned to ride a bike in three days”，而不是“practice in three days”；“the classroom was far from my dorm”中的“classroom”可能不够准确，可以改成“my classes were far from my dorm”；最后，“more convenient to me”应改为“more convenient for me”。避免重复使用“bike”，并使用“because”和“so”自然连接原因和结果。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I only learned to ride one at university, after my friends encouraged me to try. Since my classes were quite far from my dorm, I practiced every day and managed to learn within three days. Cycling soon became a much more convenient way for me to get around campus.

提案: 回答直接，能够举出台北的YouBike作为具体例子，并说明免费使用带来的便利，符合“观点+细节”的结构。需要注意：应说“the public bike-sharing system called YouBike”，而不是“system call”；“citizen”应改为复数“citizens”，或直接说“people”；“the first 30 minutes”比“the 1st 30 minutes”更适合口语考试；“which make”应改为“which makes”。另外，避免使用“UMM”等犹豫音，地点和系统名称要发音清楚。可以进一步补充当地人使用共享单车的典型场景，使答案更加自然和完整。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in Taipei. The city has a public bike-sharing system called YouBike, which many people use for short journeys. Residents can use a bike for free for the first 30 minutes, so it’s a convenient way to travel between metro stations, offices, and nearby neighborhoods.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child because I only learned how to ride one when I went to university.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I only learned how to ride one when I went to university.

表示“某个年龄阶段的孩子”时，child 前通常需要使用不定冠词 a。应说“when I was a child”，不能说“when I was child”。

× My friends at college encouraged me a lot and I practice in three days because the classroom was quite far from my dorm, so biking became much more convenient to me.

✓ My friends at college encouraged me a lot, and I practiced for three days because the classroom was quite far from my dorm, so biking became much more convenient for me.

整段是在描述过去发生的事情，前面使用了过去时 encouraged，后面的 practice 也应改为过去式 practiced。建议先确定故事发生的时间，再保持整段时态一致。

× My friends at college encouraged me a lot and I practice in three days because the classroom was quite far from my dorm, so biking became much more convenient to me.

✓ My friends at college encouraged me a lot, and I practiced for three days because the classroom was quite far from my dorm, so biking became much more convenient for me.

表示持续了多长时间时，应使用 for，例如“for three days”，而不是 in three days。表示“对某人来说方便”时，通常使用 convenient for someone，因此应说“convenient for me”。

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in Taipei, UMM where the public bike sharing system call Ubike is widely used.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in Taipei, where the public bike-sharing system called Ubike is widely used.

system 和 call 之间是被动关系，意思是“被称为 Ubike 的系统”，所以需要使用过去分词 called，而不是动词原形 call。口语中的 UMM 是停顿词，在正式表达中可以省略。

× UMM citizen can rent a bike for free for the 1st 30 minutes which make short trips very convenient.

✓ Taipei citizens can rent a bike for free for the first 30 minutes, which makes short trips very convenient.

这里谈论的是台北的居民，不是一个居民，所以 citizen 应使用复数 citizens。描述一群人时，要注意名词的复数形式。

× UMM citizen can rent a bike for free for the 1st 30 minutes which make short trips very convenient.

✓ Taipei citizens can rent a bike for free for the first 30 minutes, which makes short trips very convenient.

关系代词 which 指代前面“前30分钟可以免费租车”这一件事，整体视为单数，因此谓语应使用 makes，而不是 make。看到 which 引导的从句时，要先判断 which 指代的对象是单数还是复数。