Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: الإجابة لا تتعلق بالسؤال، لذلك يجب أولاً الإجابة مباشرة عن امتلاك دراجة في الطفولة. استخدم جملة أساسية واضحة، ثم أضف سبباً أو تفصيلاً قصيراً. تجنّب تغيير الموضوع أو استخدام عبارات غير مرتبطة بالسياق.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends, especially at weekends.

提案: تبدأ الإجابة برأي واضح، وهذا جيد، لكنها تحتوي على تكرار مثل “younger people” وأخطاء في المفرد والجمع وتركيب الجملة. استخدم “bikes are popular” بدلاً من “the bike is popular”، وقل “young people” بدلاً من “younger people” عند عدم وجود مقارنة. أكمل الفكرة بجملة صحيحة ومحددة، مثل توضيح متى ولماذا يستخدم الناس الدراجات. احرص على إنهاء الإجابة وعدم تركها معلّقة، واستخدم أدوات ربط مثل “because” و“especially”.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many young people use them in the evening. They often ride around their neighborhoods for exercise or to meet their friends.

× I think yeah the bike is popular in our country

✓ I think, yeah, bikes are popular in our country

When speaking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular phrase the bike. The plural form makes the general meaning clear.

× most of younger people

✓ most younger people

The quantifier most can be followed directly by a plural adjective and noun, as in most younger people. Alternatively, you can say most of the younger people when referring to a specific group.

× at the evening

✓ in the evening

Use the preposition in with general parts of the day: in the morning, in the afternoon, and in the evening. Use at with specific times, such as at 7 p.m.

× I think yeah the bike is popular in our country because I live in Acastal Country and most of younger people younger people use their bikes at the evening when they have

✓ I think, yeah, bikes are popular in my country because I live in Acastal Country, and most younger people use their bikes in the evening.

The original sentence repeats younger people and ends with the incomplete phrase when they have. Remove the repetition and the unfinished clause to create a complete and clear sentence. This answer also directly responds to the examiner's question about whether bikes are popular.