Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question. However, it is quite short and repeats the wording of the question. Add one specific reason or detail to make your response more developed, such as explaining how you travelled or what you used instead.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe to ride in our busy neighbourhood. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus.

提案: You answer the question directly, but the response contains unclear words, grammatical errors, repetition, and hesitation. Use “bicycles are an affordable way to travel from one place to another” instead of “transmit,” and say “many people” rather than “many peoples.” Organise your answer with a clear opinion, two reasons, and a specific example; avoid explaining the meaning of basic words such as “many people.”

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to travel from one place to another. They are especially common among students and people who live in crowded cities. In addition, many people use them for exercise and to avoid traffic jams.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because it has to transmit UH-1 Pro one place from another place and it can afford uh, many peoples.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they can transport people from one place to another and can carry many people.

The plural noun bikes must be referred to with the plural pronoun they, not the singular pronoun it. Use they can instead of it can. Also, the sentence should use a suitable verb such as transport or carry when talking about bikes moving people.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because it has to transmit UH-1 Pro one place from another place and it can afford uh, many peoples.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they can transport people from one place to another and can carry many people.

People is already the plural form of person and is an uncountable plural noun when referring to people in general. Peoples refers to different ethnic or national groups, so many peoples is not appropriate in this context. Use many people.