Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

練習Part12026-10-01 18:16:17

会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

Did you have a bike when you were child?

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

Yes.

評価

総合

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 10.0

提案: Answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Use the past tense because the question asks about your childhood, and include a brief supporting detail, such as how often you rode the bike or where you used it. Also, say “when you were a child,” not “when you were child.”

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends, especially on weekends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 20.0

提案: Give a complete answer and add a reason or specific example. Although “Yes” answers the question, it is too short to demonstrate your vocabulary, fluency, and ability to develop an idea. Use a linking word such as “because” to explain why bikes are popular.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. Many people use them for short trips, exercise, and commuting in busy cities.

文法

22: Article errors

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The singular countable noun phrase "child" needs the indefinite article "a" because it refers to one unspecified child. Use "a child" in this sentence.

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