Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct, but the tense is incorrect: use “was” instead of “am” because you are talking about the past. You could also add a brief reason or detail to make the answer more developed. Keep the answer natural and within two or three sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was dangerous, so I usually walked or took the bus to school.

提案: You appear to have misunderstood “bikes” as “bags,” so your answer does not address the question. Begin with a clear opinion about bicycles, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Use accurate vocabulary, such as “bicycles,” “commuting,” and “exercise,” and connect your ideas with linking words like “because” and “also.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and delivery workers. They are convenient and affordable, and they also help people avoid traffic. In addition, many people ride bikes for exercise and leisure.

× No, I did not have a bike when I am child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense form was instead of the present-tense form am. The noun child is singular and requires the article a.

× It is.

✓ They are.

The subject bikes is plural, so it requires the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are. The singular combination it is does not agree with bikes.

× A bag to go for jobs, schools and for delivery purposes.

✓ People use bikes to go to work, school, and make deliveries.

The original sentence is a fragment because it does not contain a complete subject-verb structure. Use a complete sentence with the subject people and the verb use.

× A bag to go for jobs, schools and for delivery purposes.

✓ People use bikes to go to work, school, and make deliveries.

Use to when describing movement toward a destination, as in go to work and go to school. The phrase go for jobs, schools is not appropriate in this context.

× Yes, it is important for the daily life.

✓ Yes, it is important for daily life.

Daily life is used in a general sense, so it normally does not take the definite article the. Use daily life rather than the daily life.