Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly in the past tense and avoid trying to express too many ideas in one sentence. Use correct verb forms, such as “had,” “rode,” and “was.” The phrase “it’s told me that I have to works continue working on it” is unclear, so explain specifically how you learned to ride or what you did with the bike. A clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details would sound more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about six years old, and I was fascinated by it. At first, I often fell off, but I kept practicing until I could ride confidently.

提案: Give a direct answer using the plural form: “Bikes are definitely popular.” Then support your opinion with specific details. Correct “bike is” to “bikes are,” “roads which is” to “roads that are,” and “ride in bikes” to “ride bikes.” Avoid the repetitive ending “So yeah, it really is” and use a linking word such as “Moreover” or “As a result” to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, bikes are definitely popular in my country. Many cities have dedicated bike lanes, which make cycling safer and more convenient. In addition, a lot of people ride bikes to commute, exercise, or avoid heavy traffic.

× I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a completed period in the past, so the past-tense form had is required instead of the present-tense form have.

× the first bicycle that I've ever ride

✓ the first bicycle that I've ever ridden

The present perfect structure have/has + past participle is required. The past participle of ride is ridden, not ride.

× I have to works continue working on it.

✓ I had to continue working on it.

After have to, the verb must be in its base form: work, not works. Because the speaker is describing a past experience, had to is more appropriate. The phrase continue working is correctly formed with a verb followed by the -ing form.

× I have a bike when I was a child and the first bicycle that I've ever ride, which is really fascinating and it's told me that I have to works continue working on it.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child. The first bicycle I ever rode was fascinating, and it taught me that I had to continue working on it.

The original sentence combines several incomplete and incorrectly connected parts. Separating the ideas into two complete sentences creates a clear subject-verb structure and avoids the malformed sequence have to works continue working.

× definitely bike is popular in my country

✓ Definitely, bikes are popular in my country.

Bikes are being discussed in general, so the plural noun bikes is needed. The plural subject also requires the plural verb are.

× some roads which is exclusive for those bikes to ride

✓ some roads that are exclusively for bikes to ride on

The relative clause refers to the plural noun roads, so the verb must be are, not is. The phrase exclusively for is also more natural when describing the purpose of the roads.

× people who are eager to ride in bikes

✓ people who are eager to ride bikes

The verb ride is normally used directly with the object when referring to riding a bicycle: ride bikes. The preposition in is not needed here. Also, ride on bikes can be used when emphasizing the surface or vehicle.