Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，理由也比较清楚，但“buy to buy”是明显重复；“my family was poorer”表达不够自然，可以改为“my family was not very well-off”或“we were financially struggling”。另外，“we didn’t have so much money”可以换成更自然的“we couldn’t afford one”。建议使用“直接回答 + 原因”的结构，并避免重复表达。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family wasn’t very well-off at the time, so we couldn’t afford one. I usually walked to school or took the bus instead.

提案: 回答了问题，也提供了通勤和锻炼两个例子，但“some people will ragged by”表达错误，应改为“some people ride bikes to work”或“some people commute by bike”。开头“I think bikes are popular”重复了两次，结尾也重复观点，影响自然度。建议用“观点 + 两个具体用途”的结构，并使用“while”或“others”连接不同人群，使答案更连贯。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work, especially in crowded cities, while others use them for exercise or leisure. They are convenient, affordable, and environmentally friendly.

× We didn't have so much money to buy to buy a bike.

✓ We didn't have enough money to buy a bike.

“buy to buy”中动词重复，导致句子结构错误。应只保留一个“buy”。此外，“enough money”更自然地表示“足够的钱”。建议检查句子中是否有重复的动词，并使用“enough + 名词”表达“足够的……”。

× Some people will ragged by to go to work and some will ride a bike just for exercise.

✓ Some people ride bikes to go to work, and others ride bikes just for exercise.

这里描述的是一个国家中通常存在的情况和习惯，不是将来发生的事情，所以应使用一般现在时“ride”，而不是“will”。“ragged by”不是正确的英语表达，应改为“ride bikes”。建议描述日常习惯、普遍事实时使用一般现在时。