Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，原因也清楚，整体语法基本正确。不过，“learn how to ride”后面最好补充“a bike”，表达更完整；此外，可以增加一个具体结果或背景，让答案更有内容，但仍应控制在2—3句话内，避免显得冗长。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I had poor balance and was afraid of falling. As a result, I never really learned how to ride one.

提案: 回答切题，并提供了上学和上班两个具体场景，但两个完整分句之间缺少连接词和标点，形成了run-on sentence。可以使用“because”“especially”或“for example”来连接观点和细节，并补充一个更具体的原因，例如交通拥堵、环保或成本低。注意使用“ride bikes”比反复使用“ride a bike”更自然。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and office workers. Many people ride them to school or work because they are inexpensive and convenient, particularly in crowded cities.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country many people choose to ride a bike to go to school or go to work

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country. Many people choose to ride a bike to go to school or work.

原句把两个完整句子直接连接在一起，中间缺少句号或合适的连接词，形成了连写句（run-on sentence）。应在“country”后加句号，将其分成两个句子。第二句中的“go to work”是固定表达，通常不需要在“work”前加“to”。