Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, but avoid repeating the wording of the question. Add one or two specific details, such as when you received the bike, how often you used it, or where you rode it. This will make your response more natural and effective while keeping it within three or four sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school. I enjoyed riding with my friends at the weekends.

提案: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Correct the self-correction and grammar: say “most people” rather than “all people most people,” and use “them” instead of “it” because “bikes” is plural. Also, avoid making an unsupported claim that everyone uses bikes every day; explain who commonly rides them and why.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in smaller cities. Many families own at least one bike because it is affordable and convenient for short journeys. In recent years, more people have also started cycling for exercise and environmental reasons.

× All people most people had it in their families and use it every day.

✓ Most people have bikes in their families and use them every day.

The sentence describes a general present situation, so use the present-tense verb have instead of the past-tense verb had. When describing regular habits or current facts, use the present simple tense.

× All people most people had it in their families and use it every day.

✓ Most people have bikes in their families and use them every day.

The noun bikes is plural, so it must be replaced by the plural pronoun them, not the singular pronoun it. Also, remove the repeated phrase All people because most people is the intended subject.