Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly and add one specific supporting detail. Use a comma after “Yes,” and consider saying “we had a bike” rather than “our family had a bike,” which sounds less natural. You could mention who used the bike or what you did with it. Linking the details with “and” would make the response smoother.

例: Yes, we had a bike when I was about three or four years old. My older brother and I often took turns riding it around our neighborhood, although I needed my parents’ help at first.

提案: Your answer is relevant and includes a clear reason, but some phrases are repetitive or unnatural. Replace “Post COVID” with “Since the COVID-19 pandemic” and avoid repeating “health” by saying “stay healthy.” Also, use a more specific result or example, such as increased cycling in parks or bike lanes, to make the answer more effective.

例: Yes, bikes have become very popular in my country, especially since the COVID-19 pandemic. Many people started cycling to stay healthy and avoid crowded public transport. Nowadays, it is common to see people riding bikes in parks and along dedicated bike lanes.