Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng mắc nhiều lỗi về từ vựng, ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt. Cụm “pulled up by a beautiful pie” không đúng ngữ cảnh; nên dùng “bought me a beautiful bike”. “In this time” nên đổi thành “At that time”, còn “this product” không tự nhiên khi nói về xe đạp; hãy dùng “it” hoặc “that bike”. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm một kỷ niệm cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, definitely. When I was a child, my parents bought me a beautiful bike. I have many happy memories of riding it around my neighborhood, especially during the summer holidays.

提案: Câu trả lời có quan điểm rõ ràng và đưa ra hai lý do phù hợp là giá cả phải chăng và sự tiện lợi, nhưng có nhiều lỗi khiến ý nghĩa chưa rõ. “by our very popular in my countries” nên sửa thành “bikes are very popular in my country”; “to turn a short tuner” có thể thay bằng “for short trips”; và cần dùng “go to school” तथा “go to the market”. Hãy sử dụng cấu trúc: trả lời trực tiếp, nêu lý do, rồi đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể về việc người dân sử dụng xe đạp.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. Many people use them to go to school, visit local markets, or travel around their neighborhoods. They are also a practical way to avoid traffic jams.

× When I was a child, I ... have a lot of memory with this product.

✓ When I was a child, I had many memories of this bike.

The phrase refers to memories from a past period, so the past-tense form had is more appropriate than the present-tense form have. Also, memory should be plural when referring to many recollections.

× ... in this time I have a lot of memory with this product.

✓ ... at that time, I had many memories of this bike.

Use at that time, not in this time, to refer to a specific past period. The correct preposition after memories is of, not with.

× ... a lot of memory ...

✓ ... many memories ...

Because the speaker is referring to several recollections, the countable noun memory must be plural: memories. Many is also suitable for plural countable nouns.

× Bikes are very popular in my countries.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country.

The speaker is referring to one country, so the singular form country is required instead of the plural form countries.

× Yes, I think so by our very popular in my countries ...

✓ Yes, I think so because bikes are very popular in my country ...

The word by cannot connect the reason to the statement. Use the conjunction because to introduce the reason. The clause also needs the subject bikes and the verb are.

× ... by our very popular in my countries ...

✓ ... because bikes are very popular in my country ...

The subject bikes is plural, so it correctly takes the plural verb are. The original phrase does not contain a grammatically complete subject-verb structure.

× ... a lot of residents in my country used to go school or go to market.

✓ ... many residents in my country go to school or go to the market by bike.

The verb go requires to before destinations: go to school and go to the market. The article the is used before the market when referring to a particular market.

× ... residents in my country used to go school or go to market.

✓ ... residents in my country go to school or go to the market by bike.

The question asks about current popularity, so the present-tense form go is more appropriate. Used to go describes a repeated past habit and does not fit the intended present meaning.