Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời chưa trả lời trực tiếp bằng cấu trúc rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, chẳng hạn như “rise” cần dùng “ride”, “by cycle” nên thay bằng “a bicycle” hoặc “my bike”, và “when went to school when the children” chưa hoàn chỉnh. Em nên bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp như “Yes, I did.”, sau đó nêu em thường dùng xe đạp để đi học và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ “when” và sắp xếp câu theo trật tự chủ ngữ + động từ + bổ ngữ.

例: Yes, I did. I really enjoyed riding my bike to school when I was a child. It was convenient, and I often rode with my friends.

提案: Em đã đưa ra quan điểm trực tiếp, nhưng câu có nhiều lỗi về từ vựng và ngữ pháp. “Bai” cần sửa thành “Bikes”, “EU country” không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh và có thể em muốn nói “in my country”, “praying convenient” nên là “very convenient”, còn “thrif” nên là “cheap” hoặc “economical”. Em cần dùng cấu trúc đầy đủ “because they are...” và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể để phát triển ý, chẳng hạn xe đạp phổ biến với học sinh hoặc người đi làm.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are convenient and economical. Many students ride them to school, and some adults use them for short journeys. They are also a good way to avoid traffic jams.

× Just I really enjoy rise by cycle, go to school when went to school when the children

✓ I really enjoyed riding a bicycle to school when I was a child.

Because the question asks about your childhood, use the past tense: enjoyed and was. Use riding after enjoyed, and use the past form was after I. Practice describing past habits with patterns such as I enjoyed ... when I was a child.

× Just I really enjoy rise by cycle, go to school when went to school when the children

✓ I really enjoyed riding a bicycle to school when I was a child.

After enjoyed, use a gerund ending in -ing: riding, not rise. Also, the correct expression is ride a bicycle. Practice the pattern enjoy + verb-ing, for example, I enjoy riding my bike.

× Just I really enjoy rise by cycle, go to school when went to school when the children

✓ I really enjoyed riding a bicycle to school when I was a child.

Use to to show movement toward a destination: riding a bicycle to school. By cycle is not the natural expression here. Use ride a bicycle or go to school by bicycle.

× Just I really enjoy rise by cycle, go to school when went to school when the children

✓ I really enjoyed riding a bicycle to school when I was a child.

A singular countable noun needs an article, so say a bicycle. Practice using a or an when mentioning one nonspecific item.

× Just I really enjoy rise by cycle, go to school when went to school when the children

✓ I really enjoyed riding a bicycle to school when I was a child.

The original answer contains incomplete and repeated clauses, so the meaning is unclear. Use a complete structure with a subject, verb, and supporting time clause: I enjoyed riding ... when I was a child. Plan the sentence before speaking and avoid repeating the same clause.

× Yes Bai is the most popular EU country because is praying convenient and thrif for everyone.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because riding them is convenient and inexpensive for everyone.

The plural subject bikes must take the plural verb are, not is. The clause after because also needs a subject: riding them is convenient. Practice checking that every clause has a clear subject and a verb that agrees with it.

× Yes Bai is the most popular EU country because is praying convenient and thrif for everyone.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because riding them is convenient and inexpensive for everyone.

When an activity functions as the subject of a clause, use the -ing form: riding them. The phrase praying convenient is incorrect; use riding them is convenient. Practice using gerunds as subjects, such as Cycling is healthy.

× Yes Bai is the most popular EU country because is praying convenient and thrif for everyone.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because riding them is convenient and inexpensive for everyone.

Thrif is not the correct adjective in this sentence. Inexpensive clearly expresses the meaning that cycling does not cost much. Also, convenient is an adjective that correctly follows is. Use adjectives after linking verbs such as be.