Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Use the past tense because you are talking about your childhood: say “I didn’t have” rather than “I don’t have.” Also, use the natural phrase “when I was a child.” Add a brief reason or detail to make your answer more complete and conversational.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on the busy roads in my neighborhood, so I usually walked or took the bus.

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too short and repeats words from the question. Add a specific reason and an example, using a linking word such as “because” or “especially” to develop your answer naturally.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and office workers. This is because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys, and many people also use them to avoid traffic jams.

× No, I don't have a bike in my child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, so the answer should use the simple past tense. Change don't have to didn't have. Use did not have, not did not had, because did already marks the past tense.

× No, I don't have a bike in my child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

In my child is not a natural English expression. Use when I was a child to refer to the period of a person's childhood. You can also say during my childhood.