Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，但有明显的时态、词汇和句子结构问题。应将“have”改为过去式“had”，将“back”改为“bike”，并用“that allowed me to...”表达“让我能够……”。避免“I usually I”的重复，并直接先给出主题句，再补充具体信息。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It allowed me to ride to school every day, so I didn’t have to take the bus. I really enjoyed cycling because it gave me more freedom.

提案: 回答观点明确，但“back”应为“bikes”，“chapped”应为“cheap”，“under convenience”应改为“cheap and convenient”。注意主谓一致：复数“bikes”后使用“they are”，并将“go to anywhere”改为“go anywhere”。可以补充具体使用场景，使理由更清晰、更自然。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. Many people use them to travel short distances, such as going to work, school, or nearby shops. In addition, cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly way to get around.

× Yes, when I was a child I have back that provide me to uh, go to school.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike that allowed me to go to school.

问题发生在过去，所以不能用现在时“have”和“provide”。应使用过去时“had”和“allowed”。此外，“back”应为“bike”，这里按语境进行了修正。

× Yes, when I was a child I have back that provide me to uh, go to school.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike that allowed me to go to school.

“provide me to go”结构不正确。表达“允许某人做某事”时，应使用“allow + 人 + to do”，因此改为“allowed me to go”。

× I usually I go to school by bike.

✓ I usually went to school by bike.

这段回答描述的是童年时期的习惯，应该使用一般过去时“went”，而不是现在时“go”。

× I usually I go to school by bike.

✓ I usually went to school by bike.

句子中“I”重复了一次，造成句子结构错误。英语中只需要保留一个主语“I”。

× Yes, I think the back in my country is very popular because they are so chapped under convenience.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，所以应使用复数“bikes”。复数主语与“they”保持一致。

× Yes, I think the back in my country is very popular because they are so chapped under convenience.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient.

“under”不能连接两个并列形容词。表示“又便宜又方便”时，应使用并列连词“and”。“chapped”根据语境应改为“cheap”。

× Many people use it to go to anywhere.

✓ Many people use them to go anywhere.

前文的“bikes”是复数，因此代词应使用复数“them”，不能使用单数“it”。

× Many people use it to go to anywhere.

✓ Many people use them to go anywhere.

“anywhere”本身表示“任何地方”，前面通常不需要介词“to”。应说“go anywhere”，而不是“go to anywhere”。