Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答方向正确，但有明显的词汇和语法错误。“had had”应改为一般过去时“had”，“back”应为“bike”。建议先直接回答，再补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或使用场景。

例: Yes, I had a little yellow bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 回答包含观点，但表达不清晰，且“back”和“bags”都应为“bikes”。“in all in my country”应改为“throughout my country”，“at last few years”应改为“in the last few years”。另外，最后一句与前文意思矛盾：如果自行车很流行，应说人们更经常使用自行车。建议使用“because”连接原因，并加入具体例子。

例: Yes, bikes have become very popular throughout my country in the last few years. Nowadays, more people use them for commuting because they are convenient, affordable, and environmentally friendly.

× When I was a child, I had had a little yellow back.

✓ When I was a child, I had a little yellow bike.

“When I was a child”描述过去某一时期的情况，使用一般过去时“had”即可。“had had”是过去完成时，通常用于表示一个过去动作发生在另一个过去动作之前，此处不需要使用过去完成时。另外，“back”应为“bike”。

× I think back are very popular in all in my country at last few years.

✓ I think bikes have become very popular in my country over the last few years.

表示“在过去几年的时间里”应使用“over the last few years”，不能说“at last few years”。“in all in my country”搭配错误，表达“在我的国家”直接使用“in my country”即可。“back”应为“bikes”。由于“over the last few years”表示从过去持续到现在的变化，使用现在完成时“have become”更自然。

× Nowadays people not often use bags.

✓ Nowadays, people do not often use bags.

一般现在时的否定句中，如果谓语动词不是be动词，需要在主语后使用助动词“do”，再加“not”，因此应为“do not often use”。“Nowadays”通常放在句首时后面加逗号。