Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你没有回答考官的问题，而是重复并改写了问题。注意“when you were a child”是正确表达，不应说“when you were the child”。请直接回答“有”或“没有”，然后补充一个具体细节，例如买车的时间、骑车地点或使用目的。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed exploring the area with my friends.

提案: 你只是重复了考官的问题，没有表达自己的观点。回答时应先明确说明自行车是否流行，然后用because、especially或for example等连接词补充原因和具体例子。建议控制在2至4句话内，避免重复题目。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in crowded cities. They are convenient, inexpensive, and environmentally friendly, so many people use them for short trips.

× Did you have a bike when you were the child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

这里表示“小时候”这一泛指概念，不是指某个特定的孩子，因此不能使用定冠词“the”。单数可数名词“child”在泛指时通常需要使用不定冠词“a”，所以应改为“a child”。建议记住固定表达“when you were a child”，表示“当你还是个孩子时”。